Really neat, make it like fifteen bpm faster and ide give a full 5. I would be tempted to lay down some vocals if there wasn't so much lead guitar but i guess that was the intention. Anyways, I really like this.

I'm ry feelin this and o prime remember i wrote a song to one of yours before ima about to wreck it over this one

Hey man i'm really digging this your flow is so legit and the lyrics are real, keep on keepin on man, lets do a collab like asap! We could make a really good track together.